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    another opinion

    ok I've been working on my site for my company for when I start to design web sites as a buisness and I want to know how can I make my site look btter and maybe more professional etc. so please give my come ideas and comments and constructive critism
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    it still loads slow for such a simple page. also, while i know you intended it, i kept thinking another part was going to show up in the lower left hand under the banner. it might be cliche, but the old Z design concept is a standard because it works. the top part of your page leads to a blank spot which takes a second to adjust to. some people will be turned off by this without even realizing why.

    maybe i'm just old school, but that's what i thought.
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    I suggest you put the about information, ie: your sales pitch, on the "home" page, rather than asking people to "please look around to find out what EYEON DESIGN is."

    Still, it is an improvement on the last version.
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    Hello!

    I like all the graphics. You have a nice, clean looking site. Yes, it does load a little slow but that can be solved simply by using superGIF from Box Top Software. I like how you used the picture from the seashore screensaver in the top graphics, looks nice!

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    thanks for all your help and I was thinking about that blank space on the left bottom I could put something there I'm not sure what though any suggestions???
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    noooo....

    blank space is good. Not everything needs to filled up. Keep blank space. Site is very cleeeean. I like it. Now you need some content Like a portfolio.
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    thanks I will... but I've been working on the site a lot lately and I have some more conent if you wanna check it out can you read the web design section and tell me if its seems ok


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    Nice spooky eye! It's coming along nicely....

    One more thing, if you didn't see already, the word gaurenteed (i don't even know if that is right!) is spelled wrong.
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