More crap from me...

*clap clap clap clap clap*

Honestly, that's quite well done.
And I am rather hard to please.
And I'm not the type to take time to complement strangers for the feel-goodiness of it.

I'd really like to see it printed on recycled brown paper with silver and white ink. Yum.
 
interesting. On the first see I got the impression it has something to do with war. What is that sign or should I ask what tanner means?
 
tannersite is my website. Tanner (my name) and it's my site (website). Yea, uhm, I was young when I thought it up. Should I change it? I guess I could...
 
I like the spraypaint effect aroung the logo - but think the badge taped to the wall is kinda corny looking. It doesn't look very real - it's edges are too even and it's not dirty at all.
 
edges are too even? Which edges I can fix that. I'll make it real dirty too.

Thanks.
 
well you were trying to make it look like a piece of paper taped to a wall, right? It just doesn't give me a good idea of what it actually is, just looks like a black box floating there. The edges need less definition, maybe a lighter border or some smear - it looks to clean compared to the spray paint.
 
I see what you're saying. I wasn't going for the "paper" look per say. More of a "sticker/poster" look (Ever got a sticker you don't want to use right away so you tape it?). Yea, but it may be hard for people to identify with that.

So a blur on the edges might look good you think?
 
Well both the sticker and the paint are the same black, and I don't think in the real world it would look like that. The border need's to get defined somehow, the sticker and the paint would have a different gloss, or slightly different color or something, you should be able to tell where one stops and the other one starts.
 
I'll add some gloss to the sticker. And work on a better border. *Will post an update tomorrow. Right now I have to remember the US preamble. :(
 
I think it's great!
That 'sign' looks like one of those plasticy label things that you use use a little machine to punch the letters into. Then the letters are all raised above the rest of the label, and you and stick in onto something. I remember using them in a Pet Store I used to work in to label the tanks...

Hmm, bet that didn't make any sense ;)
 
You need to create definition between the lower edge of the label and the spray paint to give it a 3D look. The areas under the tape have this, so just continue it all the way across the bottom.
 
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